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Prologue

Jack awoke with a fright. He keeps having the same dream every night. He says to himself “It’s not possible it’s just not”, but it is, his family is gone. He remembers that day like it was yesterday. The day they were going to California to spend the summer there. He knows he should have gone with them, but he didn’t want to. Something didn’t feel right to him, like he knew he made the right choice. That feeling came to life after he heard that his family was killed in a plane crash while in midflight.
He will never forgive himself for that. He knows he should have stopped them from getting on the plane, but he didn’t. He didn’t know that the feeling was real. He thought it was all in his head. So now alone no family we find him in the forests of Colorado. He is just wandering through. Until he stumbles upon what seems to be a stream out of place, like it doesn’t belong. He walks over to it and sees that it has crystal clear water. He says to himself, “Well it seems fine”, so he takes a drink.  Amazing feeling came over him. He felt like a new man (even though he’s a teen) it was a wonderful feeling.
Then he notices a pack of wolves running toward him.  He thinks they are just on a hunt. Then they stop in front of him. He starts to become afraid. They start attacking him. Then he gets knocked out. When he awakes he finds himself all cut up and still outside. He can’t figure out why they did that. He thinks he should be dead. Why is he still alive? Then he realizes “The water” he says to himself.  Can it be? He doesn’t feel any pain. So he just lets it go.
©2009-2010 *thewolfguy5
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eh its a start tell me if i should change anything

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:iconanimallover1990:
its interesting, everything is spelled right, its good and its early in the morning here im still half asleap

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:iconthewolfguy5:
ty thats the way i felt when i finished it was like 3am

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:iconanimallover1990:
well i just woke up

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lol

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my new book [link]
What You Remember You Forget but What You Forget You Remember
You can change a man but you can't change a mans instincts

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